Why did you the third paragraph of your rewritten composition—Because I thought it was off the point.

Jane is a smart girl in theclass who is prettier than _______.

Let’s back up. Where was I—You ___________________about the trip to SouthAfrica.

The girl is seriously ill，otherwise sheworking instead of staying in bed all day long

In the survey they listed twelve kinds of food _______would affect the work of the brain．